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[Captain Beatdown]

You desperately need to fix your audio mixing.
I couldn't finish watching due to the incredible amount of distortion on just about every soud in the movie. It could be due to how you recorded the audio but i think it may have more to do with the level at which you had all your sounds within flash before exporting.
It's a simple issue that can be easily fixed and would've improved the quality of your film 10 fold.

BinaryDood responds:

Yeah I am aware of that :(

Hopefully wont happen again

[Baldie: Episode 1]

Quite liked this one, you've got a good sense of humor!
The voice acting for Baldie is great, nice timing and well delivered.
The animation is also quite good, movement is fluid and while the lip syncing sometimes doesn't match the syllable it's well animated to the dialogue and believable.
I suppose the biggest downfall is the simple drawings which aren't quite stylish enough to warrant the primarily black and white colour pallet.
That being said, i really liked it and can't wait to see you improve.
5 for you!

RubbishPandy responds:

most ego-satisfying review so far, thank you :3

[KR47: Urinal Cake]

Cool animation, great use of colour and nice fluid character animation.
I suppose the diolouge got to me in the end, seemed a bit forced and the banter between the two guys was a bit odd considereing they just met, if they did?
Great stuff anyway, hope to see more!

Ghosty22 responds:

They've known each other for a long time. Pete and Rob have been in previous episodes together, such as "KR47: Zombie Apocalypse" and"KR47: Fat Guy Club." I guess, because it was going to be a short, I was hoping to not have to introduce the characters. Maybe it's just something I have to do, due to the fact that not many people know the series...

[The Elephant in the Room]

hahaha that was great!
Loved the 'where's the elephant' song and the owners numerous hat changes.
Great little toon, nice voice acting and pretty good animation too.
5 for you!

koit responds:

Thanks kind Sir. :)

[Extortion: A love story]

Seemed like it was about to go somewhere but then it ended.
Nifty character design and good voice acting, perhaps mute the audio when you're not talking though to get rid of that annoying room sound.
Cool flash, just seemed to end quite suddenly with only a few jokes.

Krutches responds:

I actually added the room sound there because the silence was a bit annoying.
Thanks for your input though, I kind of rushed the ending in a night and had higher hopes when I first created it.
-TacoSoup

[Contemplate Life]

Not really a comtemplation.....

I'm not much of a God person so i can't say i really connected with the overall message of your work.
I found the dialouge to be quite whiny and self-pitying to begin with and when it eventually developed to be a religious piece you lost me.
I suppose the main issue i had with the film is that the character is presented in such a negative light and the whole visual style is dark and depressing but when God eventually comes into the equation nothing really changes.
It's just this sort of downward spiral of depression that keeps going because this guy hasn't lived his life for God.
To me the guy just comes off as a rather boring and jaded human being who's life sucks because he doesn't do anything other than complain about how much his life sucks.
If he wasn't such a negative nancy, aimlessly wandering around waiting for his life to be improved by some sort of magical external force then maybe he'd look on the bright side a bit more.
And finally it's revealed that all of these problems will go away if the guy decides to love God...credit card debt included.
This is all just my opinion like your film is yours but i felt like you missed your mark with this film.
The drawings were nice but a bit inconsistent at times, some images were quite powerful and detailed while some were very plain and lacked the emotional force some other scenes had.
Music was quite suitible for the mood you were going for and your dialouge was paced pretty well between sections.

nahtanojmal responds:

Getting people out of depression is not my mark.
Getting people to think about their life after death is my mark.
I'm sorry you don't think it's a contemplation but you did write a length review so you must have thought about something ;)
Thanks for your honest review